[review] Lemon Law (part 1)
Oct. 23rd, 2007 01:03 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
layannSame as in the entry before: This is also only my own personal opinion it is no objective review. AT all. AND it also is NOT intended to do harm just post my opinion.
Part 2 will follow soon, i haven't read the story-parts. So part 2 will include them.
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Lime Law 2 by Fireangels, 156 pages (incl. some color pages + Poster), 6,50€
Content
Overall appearance: It looks very stylish the way it's set up. The red riding hood is cute BUT (hehe my first but) he looks FAR too cute for a cover of a 18+ anthology. I know that he's not even near cute .. well but it.. dunno would have been more of an eyecatch to have a pornish pic but onyl a cutout or sth like that so taht the viewer/reader/buyer gets interested and curious. But as i said stylish none the less and the color is quite good.
Poster by Aziell
Hm Again i am not a sucker fpr 3Dish stuff ^^M but he looks really sexy. xD
Insert pic by Mathia
Oww this one is a good one. *nods* it's a hell of a sexy pic and it's simple and simply perfect. Although i must admit i am not a real fan of her artwork but this one got me <3
Little Runaway by SlippedDee
The cover is a good cover makes you curious. Her style is mature (very mature) and good developed. Wich is very nice eyecandy. I remember in my last review i did not like her style at all but she changed so much that is woah. So.. the story itself... ah do not expect ANY deep story cause this is a 18+ anthologies and most of the stuff is PWP. So for "little runaway" it's the same. I personally reaaaaally think she has to still learn about storytelling and story developing. Even if there's not much story its not easy to follow sometimes and the speechbubbles are a bit confusing. There are some bits where a bit more panels would have been necessary but that's okay. not really a problem
BUT what was a problem was.. she adds though bubbles and soundwords where they are absolutely not necessary OR disturbing the reading flow. That annoyed me.. argh. ;_; Other fact: Soundwords. I REALLY REALLY apreciate it if people (non japnese) are using them BUT you have to knwo when and what has to be in there. And as sad as is sounds.. Dee doesn't know that.. it was so hard to follow the Sex scenes when the fucking soundwords were so off and.. disgusting. I was more amused then .. turned on ^^, So same goes for.. A THING WICH DRIVES ME MAD WHEN READING YAOI!! A MAN DOES NOT HAVE ASSJUICES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he just doesnt! a woman also cause an asshole is NO VAGINA! even if you touch it there won't be any stuff coming out like juices!! maybe other stuff but not something similar to lubricant. And not even if you rub a penis like mad that precume won't be so much that you can actually have your WHOLE hand full of Liquid. Thanks very much for you attention. God i think that's such a turn off. really. ;_; I don't want to harm Dee I just saw it here and i wanted to say that in gerneral. ><;
Buuuuut not to mention besides my bitching about those general stuff Dees story is one of the better ones and very SEXEH!
Picture by Zombiesmile
It's Zombie :D it's sexy and i have nothing to say
Pillowtalk by Niki Smith
Ah.. personally NOT MY THING. just to say it first. it's just a pic but it's faaar to simple althoug i like it simple and .. i think not even near asthetic, i know analsex is NOT asthetic but.. that has nothing to do with it. The anatomy just looks off. Mhm ._. sounds hopefully not so terrible but i plainly not like it.
Sen by Emilie Jolie
Eh.. ug.. I first mixed her up with Lorialet *hits herself* but.. personally even though they're different all the things i said about Lorialet would apply here. the Story is okay and also nothing special but hey, we're talking about a 18+ anthology, ne. There was also some disturbances in the reading flow.. means some panesl were so strange i had so think over what they're doing and it made it a bit bumpy. The style is also sketchy a bit rushed sometimes but .. overall.. not so bad ^^; not to my personal liking but hey~ BUT a very minus: the anatomy is totally off. I don#t think that bodies were anywhere near sexy and that is not so very good in such an anthology. =_=;
Distracted, In the dark & Homework by Niki Smith
I think better than "pillowtalk" i really liked that in the dark piece ^^~
Friday at 9:10 pm(by Loeffel)
This was a real suprise. I haven't seen any manga or comics by Loeffel (i wil call her by that animexx name now). Overall this story is lovely, good told and sexy BUT if you ask me.. too short. I would have liked to see more.
I have nothing to criticize on the storytelling and stuff. It's very mature and good developed and not to mention fun reading. The characters are also nice and the story is kept simple. The screentonin work is also good. I personally have more a thing for the "good old fashioned style" of screentoning but that is only my own interest. ^^;
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So.. my conlcusion so far without the stories... okay i'd say. Nothing so really outstanding so far. but maybe the stories will get me (but i doubt that cause mostly i have more to criticize on stories than manga). ´Let's see~
So to come with the next update:
"Wie man einen Lackschaden bezahlt by Sai Nan"
"Alltag by Lail"
Part 2 will follow soon, i haven't read the story-parts. So part 2 will include them.
.
Lime Law 2 by Fireangels, 156 pages (incl. some color pages + Poster), 6,50€
Content
Overall appearance: It looks very stylish the way it's set up. The red riding hood is cute BUT (hehe my first but) he looks FAR too cute for a cover of a 18+ anthology. I know that he's not even near cute .. well but it.. dunno would have been more of an eyecatch to have a pornish pic but onyl a cutout or sth like that so taht the viewer/reader/buyer gets interested and curious. But as i said stylish none the less and the color is quite good.
Poster by Aziell
Hm Again i am not a sucker fpr 3Dish stuff ^^M but he looks really sexy. xD
Insert pic by Mathia
Oww this one is a good one. *nods* it's a hell of a sexy pic and it's simple and simply perfect. Although i must admit i am not a real fan of her artwork but this one got me <3
Little Runaway by SlippedDee
The cover is a good cover makes you curious. Her style is mature (very mature) and good developed. Wich is very nice eyecandy. I remember in my last review i did not like her style at all but she changed so much that is woah. So.. the story itself... ah do not expect ANY deep story cause this is a 18+ anthologies and most of the stuff is PWP. So for "little runaway" it's the same. I personally reaaaaally think she has to still learn about storytelling and story developing. Even if there's not much story its not easy to follow sometimes and the speechbubbles are a bit confusing. There are some bits where a bit more panels would have been necessary but that's okay. not really a problem
BUT what was a problem was.. she adds though bubbles and soundwords where they are absolutely not necessary OR disturbing the reading flow. That annoyed me.. argh. ;_; Other fact: Soundwords. I REALLY REALLY apreciate it if people (non japnese) are using them BUT you have to knwo when and what has to be in there. And as sad as is sounds.. Dee doesn't know that.. it was so hard to follow the Sex scenes when the fucking soundwords were so off and.. disgusting. I was more amused then .. turned on ^^, So same goes for.. A THING WICH DRIVES ME MAD WHEN READING YAOI!! A MAN DOES NOT HAVE ASSJUICES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he just doesnt! a woman also cause an asshole is NO VAGINA! even if you touch it there won't be any stuff coming out like juices!! maybe other stuff but not something similar to lubricant. And not even if you rub a penis like mad that precume won't be so much that you can actually have your WHOLE hand full of Liquid. Thanks very much for you attention. God i think that's such a turn off. really. ;_; I don't want to harm Dee I just saw it here and i wanted to say that in gerneral. ><;
Buuuuut not to mention besides my bitching about those general stuff Dees story is one of the better ones and very SEXEH!
Picture by Zombiesmile
It's Zombie :D it's sexy and i have nothing to say
Pillowtalk by Niki Smith
Ah.. personally NOT MY THING. just to say it first. it's just a pic but it's faaar to simple althoug i like it simple and .. i think not even near asthetic, i know analsex is NOT asthetic but.. that has nothing to do with it. The anatomy just looks off. Mhm ._. sounds hopefully not so terrible but i plainly not like it.
Sen by Emilie Jolie
Eh.. ug.. I first mixed her up with Lorialet *hits herself* but.. personally even though they're different all the things i said about Lorialet would apply here. the Story is okay and also nothing special but hey, we're talking about a 18+ anthology, ne. There was also some disturbances in the reading flow.. means some panesl were so strange i had so think over what they're doing and it made it a bit bumpy. The style is also sketchy a bit rushed sometimes but .. overall.. not so bad ^^; not to my personal liking but hey~ BUT a very minus: the anatomy is totally off. I don#t think that bodies were anywhere near sexy and that is not so very good in such an anthology. =_=;
Distracted, In the dark & Homework by Niki Smith
I think better than "pillowtalk" i really liked that in the dark piece ^^~
Friday at 9:10 pm(by Loeffel)
This was a real suprise. I haven't seen any manga or comics by Loeffel (i wil call her by that animexx name now). Overall this story is lovely, good told and sexy BUT if you ask me.. too short. I would have liked to see more.
I have nothing to criticize on the storytelling and stuff. It's very mature and good developed and not to mention fun reading. The characters are also nice and the story is kept simple. The screentonin work is also good. I personally have more a thing for the "good old fashioned style" of screentoning but that is only my own interest. ^^;
----
So.. my conlcusion so far without the stories... okay i'd say. Nothing so really outstanding so far. but maybe the stories will get me (but i doubt that cause mostly i have more to criticize on stories than manga). ´Let's see~
So to come with the next update:
"Wie man einen Lackschaden bezahlt by Sai Nan"
"Alltag by Lail"
